she swooned, and
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she swooned, and
and tripped, flailing
greatly embarrassing herself
right in front
Trug stood perplexed.
And then I
Thought I might bring this one back from the grave. :) don't think we'll be winning any writing awards but here is what we've got so far!
The sands were soaked with blood of the fallen the crowd was elated by the Mead and Show of excessive violence. Though wanting more bloodshed, a loyal manager jumps down and races towards the champ and slap him with a wet fish ,infuriated yet aroused the champ strikes him down hard Using the opponents dismembered limb. "Dont even think about touching my pretty new trophy or you will regret ever being born!" screamed the gladiator, waving the dismembered limb at the red and angry king of the arena, the gladiator looked around anxiously for his WHORE! Finally, after several women he found, what we would call a short sword in his designer hand bag. With a flourish, she swooned, and and tripped, flailing greatly embarrassing herself right in front Trug stood perplexed. And then I"
put my hand
Added some commas and full stops so that it sorta makes sense (and my inner grammar nazi is happy)
The sands were soaked with blood of the fallen. The crowd was elated by the Mead and Show of excessive violence, though wanting more bloodshed, a loyal manager jumps down and races towards the champ and slaps him with a wet fish. Infuriated yet aroused, the champ strikes him down hard using the opponents dismembered limb. "Dont even think about touching my pretty new trophy or you will regret ever being born!" screamed the gladiator, waving the dismembered limb at the red and angry king of the arena. The gladiator looked around anxiously for his WHORE!
Finally, after several women he found what we would call a short sword in his designer hand bag. With a flourish, she swooned, and tripped flailing, greatly embarrassing herself. Right in front Trug stood perplexed. "And then I put my hand around him like
on the warrior's
throat like this."
Laughing out loud
Trug's audience looked
friend of the
mutton merchant's little
wetting himself to
Hmm, either people aren't grasping the concept of this or English is proving to be difficult. Apoc I'm pretty sure English is your first language so I'll ask if you were drunk when you added your three words. ;)
If you put the last few together you get this - "Trug's audience looked friend of the mutton merchant's little wetting himself to"
I'll admit "looked friend of" didn't quite make sense either but I ran with it anyway but at this point I think we're helplessly off track and in need of a reboot! Let's close this poor guy out and start again shall we?
Here is take 2 - http://forum.pitofwar.com/showthread...d-story-take-2
yeah, i may be enjoying a beer or two, and imagined some other words in there.... lol
as an aside, bucks parties ftw :P muchos beer for all :D